Flower St.
New York City
28/3/16
25 Riverside Drive
Fairmont Hotsummer, NY E4A AM 7
New York
Dear Sir/Madam
I wish to complain about all “No Parking” signs along my street. This is the first time I found the “No Parking” signs since I am live here.
First, if you put all that signs along my street , where do you think I should parking my car ?
Second, when I parking my car there, no one is complain about it. So, what's wrong?
Finally, why you just put that signs along my street while the others not?
I think the government need to discuss again the policy to put all that “ No Parking” signs along my streets.
I looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully
Dewi Endah Astuti
Dewi,I think you missed the addressee,I mean you didn't mention the letter is for a directur,or something like that.
BalasHapusAnother that, I think you intended to write " all those signs" instead of "all that signs", right?
Keep writing Dewi,����
Dewi, I think will be better if you add a "comma" after you write "yours faithfully". Maybe it'll make your letter more perfect. Fighting!
BalasHapusi agree with shofi, it's better for you to write for whom is the letter send to. CMIIW.
BalasHapus